| 16
jun 2005
ALICIA FRIDMAN (ATHENS,GREECE)
As the poet, " the Fairy tale lie has told, yes in it a hint " - and the story brought to your attention completely corresponds to a playful conclusion of a fine Pushkin fairy tale. Though names of characters, no less than names and addresses of sites (except for real forpost.ru) are invented, in a basis of the story the original history which has happened not so long ago me and one my texts lays. That incident is settled; but as the free manipulation with another's materials, alas, is the frequent phenomenon in the Network (and not only), I think, that the history about a crime without punishment still dooolgo will not lose the urgency. P.S. All the texts involved in the story, belong to me:-))) Alicia Fridman.
CRIME WITHOUT PUNISHMENT
The comic story in letters with a prologue and an epilogue
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_____ the Prologue _____
It is published on Katya Balalajkinoj's personal site
http: // balalajka.narod.rut
On December, 3rd, 2003
Declaration of love
The small story
Now it is strange to me even to think, that I could so long to live without you, and this life seem to me normal. Certainly, I was absolutely not skilled, much did not understand, and did not suspect even, how many new paints you as volshebno you change a life … And even bring when all has been solved, I at heart still changed. You understand, I so am tired in the 25 from complexity and a complexity, and you, you seem to me such uneasy, such closed, self-sufficient – do not rise! – that I changed: whether I can? Whether On forces to me will cope with you?
I recollect these fears and I laugh cheerfully(I am cheerfully dared). You have appeared not simply simple, accessible and is remarkable sympathetic; you have managed for these years to become the irreplaceable friend. How many projects we have carried out together, how many joyful minutes have presented each other, how many money have earned! Owing to you I became absolutely another: the strong, modern, self-assured woman. And you all the same: always ready to cooperation, undemanding and hardy! You never ask anything, you only generously give, and I am immensely grateful to you for your gifts(for nothing). Also you know – let it will seem to someone ridiculous, let! – but I wish to admit after 5 years of a joint life to you love. I publicly declare: I love you, my darling, my unique … a computer!
It is printed in female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
http: // www.izabella.rut/
On January, 10th, 2004
Recognition
The story
The author: Evelina Krysyuk
It is strange to me even to think today, that I could so long to live without you, and this life seem to me normal. Certainly, I was absolutely not skilled, much did not understand, and did not suspect even, how many new paints you as fantastically you change a life … And even bring when all has been solved, I at heart still doubted. You understand, I so am tired in the 25 from complexity and a complexity, and you, you seem to me such uneasy, such closed, self-sufficient – do not rise! – that I changed: whether I can? Whether On forces to me will cope with you?
I recollect these fears and I laugh cheerfully(I am cheerfully dared). You have appeared not simply simple, accessible and is remarkable sympathetic; you have managed for these years to become the irreplaceable friend. How many projects we have carried out together, how many joyful minutes have presented each other, how many money have earned! Owing to you I became absolutely another: the strong, modern, self-assured woman. And you all the same: always ready to cooperation, undemanding and hardy! You never ask anything, you only generously give, and I am immensely grateful to you for your gifts(for nothing). Also you know – let it will seem to someone ridiculous, let! – but I wish to admit after 5 years of a joint life to you love. I publicly declare: I love you, my darling, my unique … noutbuk!
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The letter
To the letting out(the releasing) editor
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
To Jeanne Shpan
Date: on January, 13th 2004 18.45
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: Jeanne Shpan <izabella @.rut>
Theme: I Demand explanations!
Dear madam Shpan! I for a long time and with big interest read your magazine, but today, having opened your page, I have been simply struck. On January, 10th this year you have printed story Eveliny Krysyuk "Recognition". But it is my story! Under the name "Declaration of love" it has been placed 3 more December, 2003 on my site http: // balalajka.narod.rut of what you can personally be convinced. Any Krysyuk I the nobility do not know also copyrights to it never transmitted. I wait for your explanations in occasion of happened.
Yours faithfully
Katya Balalajkina
The answer
Letting out(Releasing) editor
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
Jeannes Shpan
Date: on January, 15th 2004 11.05
From whom: Jeanne Shpan <shpan@izabella.rut>
To whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
Theme: Re: I Demand explanations!
Dear madam Balalajkina. We are very grateful to you for your alive, emotional letter. The main strategy of our magazine – interaction with readers is active, and we try to not leave any letter without the answer. It is very pleasant, that in your face we have the close and not indifferent reader. We hope, that you and in the further do not change the reader's sympathies, and we, in turn, shall try and to please henceforth you new, interesting materials.
Successes to you and material welfare.
The letting out(releasing) editor
Jeanne Shpan
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"Isabella" - all the best only for you!
The letter
To the letting out(the releasing) editor
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
To Jeanne Shpan
Date: on January, 15th 2004 11.25
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: Jeanne Shpan <shpan@izabella.rut>
Theme: I so shall not leave this!
Listen, you that, scoff, whether that? For whom you accept me? Yes at me one paper publications of 20 pieces it will be typed, not including network! I in 2001 have taken the second a place in a nomination « Comic prose » at competition « Young ñåòåâèê-2001 », and you write boorish letters to me! You that, for the rural little fool accept me? Have filched all over again my story, and now together the answer of a leg(foot) about me wipe? Well pogodite. I now shall write the letter on site Ricn.ru in which I shall state all this history and our correspondence I shall add too! All Internet learns(finds out), that you for people, and it will be a shame to you!
Katya Balalajkina
The letter
To the editor-in-chief
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
Claudias Korejko
Date: on January, 17th 2004 7.33
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: Claudia Korejko <chief@izabella.rut>
Theme: Plagiarism
Dear madam Korejko! I already addressed on this question to the letting out(releasing) editor of your magazine to Jeanne Shpan, but, it is visible, at this lady of a problem with reading and printed letters it does not understand. I address now to you. On January, 10th, 2004 in your magazine plagiarism has been printed: not which story Eveliny Krysyuk "Recognition". The story belongs to me, I its author, and for the first time it have been printed on December, 3rd, 2003 on my site http: // balalajka.narod.rut under the name "Declaration of love". I am printed in the Network three years, but with such mean theft I collide(face) for the first time. However, after the boorish answer of your editor Shpan to be surprised already it is necessary nothing. (the Answer I apply, can be convinced). Can to answer, certainly, in the same spirit or to not answer at all, but I warn you: I, certainly, shall not go to court, but I reserve the right to itself to make this history known to all Internet by means of site Ricn.ru and other sites and the forums, were interested(interested) scandals and flames.
Katya Balalajkina
Internal correspondence on a server izabella.rut
Date: 17.01.2004 9.44.
To whom: to Jeanne Shpan
From whom: Chief
Jeanne, I has not understood, what at you again for problems? What it for Balalajkina? it writes, that "Repentance" – her story. You descended(went) on her site, have checked up, it is the truth? Also what for the idiotic answer you have sent it?
K.K.
Date: 17.01.2004 9.48.
To whom: Chief
From whom: Jeanne Shpan
I have mechanically sent it our pattern of answers, and to a site did not go yet.
Jeanne
Date: 17.01.2004 10.30.
To whom: to Jeanne Shpan
From whom: Chief
I shall give you mechanically! And what leshego you wait? By the letter, this madama is adjusted(set up) seriously. Immediately check up, whether there is such site and such story. By the way, and what such Krysyuk?
K.K.
Date: 17.01.2004 12.20.
To whom: Chief
From whom: Jeanne Shpan
Yes, unfortunately, this hysteric woman Balalajkina of the right: the story, similar, indeed it … Well for people, I simply do not know! Only just rasplevalis with clause(article) from "Kosmo" which this kretinka Galchinskaya has given out for the as again! By the way, on site Balalajkinoj and to read there is nothing, except for this story.
Krysyuk – the virtual person. Anything about it I do not know, except for free-of-charge emejla.
Jeanne
Date: 17.01.2004 14.11.
To whom: to Jeanne Shpan
From whom: Chief
Just was on site Balalajkinoj. Precisely, Krysyuk stibrila the story!
I hope, the fee to it yet have not paid????
K.K.
Date: 17.01.2004 14.14.
To whom: Chief
From whom: Jeanne Shpan
Well you, certainly, no! But what we shall make?
Jeanne
Date: 17.01.2004 14.18.
To whom: to Jeanne Shpan
From whom: Chief
And it you think, that you will make. These are your problems, and I am tired for you otbrekhivatsya.
K.K.
Date: 17.01.2004 14.20
To whom: Chief
From whom: Jeanne Shpan
Klavochka, well I am not guilty! Whence I could know, that Krysyuk have filched the story! Give so: you will write to this Balalajkinoj, and I shall understand with Krysyuk. Well please, Klavochka! At you so well it turns out to satisfy the furious authors …
Jeanne
Date: 17.01.2004 14.25.
To whom: to Jeanne Shpan
From whom: Chief
All right, I shall write Balalajkinoj – but consider, it last time. I send you clause(article) of sisters the Hook « Female games in collective: how to manipulate nachalnitsej ». it should be subtracted(deducted), they are not able to put commas and other signs on a punctuation, gift(for nothing), that professional psychologists. At the same time you will update the repertoir, and that recently your features very monotonous became:-) …
TO. TO.
Date: 17.01.2004 14.28
To whom: Chief
From whom: Jeanne Shpan
Thanks, Klavochka! I Promise, it last time. I sit down to find clause(article).
Grateful Jeanne
The answer
The editor-in-chief
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
Claudias Korejko
Date: on January, 17th 2004 18.02
From whom: Claudia Korejko <chief@izabella.rut>
To whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
Theme: Explanations
Hello, dear madam Balalajkina! First of all, allow to make to you our apologies in occasion of the answer of letting out(of releasing) editor Jeanne Shpan to your letter from January, 13th of this year and to notice, that anybody and did not think you to offend. The letter intended to other reader, and has been sent to you by mistake. I hope, now, when this small annoying misunderstanding was explained, we can pass to more serious questions.
Dear Katya! I with big interest have familiarized with the maintenance(contents) of your site and should pay you a sincere compliment: despite of yours rather the early age, your prose shows itself mature and fine samples of domestic literature.
But, unfortunately, should recognize, that the epistolary genre is not yours konkom. Your letters have seemed to me much more poorly your prose. Especially is evident and makes unpleasant impression discrepancy of word usage. For example, characterizing history with Krysyuk, you use a word "plagiarism". But the plagiarism, dear(expensive) Katyusha is a penal act and to prove someone's guilt, it is necessary to prove criminal intention. Differently, to accuse us of the conscious publication of plagiarism, you should prove, that we knew, that the author of the story you, instead of Krysyuk. But you in fact perfectly understand, that we did not know this and could not know. Thus, it is a question no more than of a random error, instead of about a deliberate copyright infringement.
And in general, me it seems, you it is too close to heart have accepted all this history. Here you write on the site, that by education you the philologist. Means, you should know, to what changes have undergone in modern posmodernistskom the world of concept "text" and "author". Really, Katenka, you never heard about postmodernist understanding of the literature as Metatext? And Bart's well-known thesis about death of the Author? Much, much now is exposed to the correction, many firm before norms(rates) are reconsidered, and, in my opinion, more than fairly.
To take though your story. Whether you can to recognize, in all honesty, what you the first have thought up such plot? I, for example, such somewhere once already read something. About it does not justify behaviour Krysyuk, written off(copied) all podchistuyu, but in fact we on the sly something somewhere borrow all, whether not so? Here also leaves, what the difference between frank larceny and creative processing consists not as, and in quantity(amount) … Unless is not present, darling Katyusha?
I hope, mine more than the detailed letter has answered all the questions which have arisen at you and has erased, persuasive desire to write on any forums, to arrange scandals … What for it, golubushka? What for to you scandalous popularity? You not Edichka Lemons, really. Besides if you think, that small skandalchik to us will strongly damage, is compelled to disappoint you. Anything, except for increase in an audience, it is to "Isabella" does not threaten. And you only in vain will waste time also forces which could be spent for your remarkable creativity which so pleases all us.
In summary I inform you Evelline address - evelina@bzz.rut. We with this person interrupt all contacts, but you if want, can state it everything, that of it think. We delete the story "Recognition" from our site and we make to you of an apology.
Yours faithfully
Claudia Korejko,
The editor-in-chief
Female the Internet-magazine
"Isabella"
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"Isabella" - all the best only for you!
The letter
To the editor-in-chief
Female the Internet-magazine "Isabella"
Claudias Korejko
Date: on January, 18th 2004 9.20
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: Claudia Korejko <chief@izabella.rut>
Theme: the Answer
Dear madam Korejko! Thanks for such big and detailed letter. I accept your apologies, as you have cleaned(removed) the story. Anywhere I to complain not I shall and water you with a dirt I shall not become, we shall consider(count), that the problem is solved. And here Krysyuk I shall by all means write, do not doubt.
Katya Balalajkina
The letter
Katyas Balalajkinoj
Eveline Krysyuk
Date: on January, 18th 2004 10.20
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: the Ale <evelina@bzz.rut>
Theme: Theft
Hello, Evelina! I do not know you, and I do not wish to know, but I write to express you the deepest contempt. You have stolen my story "Declaration of love", have given it other name, have replaced in the beginning of 2 words, and in the end – a computer on noutbuk, have signed the surname and have sent in magazine " Isabella ". Tell fairly, it is not a shame to you? You that, do not understand, what theft of the another's story is a same crime, how theft of an another's purse? However, at me such sensation what to speak with you on educational themes – all the same that toloch water in stupe. I shall tell to you only one. I hope, that you have spent the fee for "Recognition" with advantage(benefit) for yourselves and its sum quite corresponded(met) to your expectations; but if remains a little more, buy the Criminal code and esteem there, that such plagiarism. I about you shall not soil a hand, but on the future can be useful.
Katya Balalajkina,
The original author of the story
"Declaration of love" ("Recognition")
The answer
Eveliny Krysyuk
To Katya Balalajkinoj
Date: on January, 21st 2004 17.07
From whom: the Ale <evelina@bzz.rut>
To whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
Theme: Re: Theft
Hello, Katya. First of all sincerely I ask from you a pardon. I understand your sharp tone, moreover: you have the right of me even matom to send … And send, but before, I beg, listen to me. I do not hope for understanding, I at all do not know, what for I am professed before you, but I ask you, read through this letter up to the end.
You, likely, represent me vile, aggressive khishchnitsej, professional vorovkoj, ready on all for the sake of money … Are not present, Katya, it not so! I have taken your story not for the sake of the fee (by the way, to me it and have not paid). I, can, to myself is opposite. But imagine my destiny.
From the childhood I adored the literature. I have become engrossed in reading klassikami up to a headache, night without a break. And gradually, from this intoxication the literature, the impudent desire was born: to write most! I by the nature the person very hot teen, (very heavy childhood has affected) and before I have dared to write something, have passed(have taken place) years. I wrote, re-read written and burnt it. I understood, that is worthless, that I write badly, disgustingly but as contrast meanwhile huge was awful, not having names that bubbled and muchilo me inside, and those pity sample words in which it was embodied! Me muchila the beauty of the world and its complexity, me excited thousand vague plans, unusual, fantastic dreams, and how many time dreamed me, waking up, I rushed to table, aspiring to embody though something – but alas! I acceptable could not write anything, all was so ridiculously, so silly …
Understand, Katya, is tragedy: in me have enclosed soul of the artist, but have not given talent. I see all, all I understand – and I can express nothing! As the cow, the word of honour. Can, not be I such widely-read, I would become ordinary grafomankoj, would write to myself any rubbish and imagined myself the writer. But I understand the literature and I know the price "creations". And I am a lot of years at night write, going woolgathering and rising highly, and I re-read written in the morning and I tear it. Thus I have not lost love to graceful literature. I actively watch(keep up) all novelties, and recently I am am helped(assisted) with this by the Internet.
Some times so was: I read someone's novel or the story and felt: similar! It so is similar to my dreams, on my vague languor and imagination! As if(as) we with this author feel a life in a unison. But when I have got on your site, Katya, I have tested the present(true) shock. My God, yes you have stated everything, everything, that lived inside of me as if(as) I telepaticheski have transferred(transmitted) All of you the sensations! I was so is shaken(amazed), that did not sleep 2 nights. I wished to write to you and to express admiration, but could not find the necessary words – also because felt insult. « Well why it such talented? – I thought of you. – why to it everything, and me of anything? »
Yes, it is Mozart and Salieri's history, you will tell. Also will be right. I painfully envy you. On your background I so sharply feel the lack of talent, the pettiness! I admired you, both admired, and envied, and hated, and at the same time learned(found out)! I so could write, possess I your talent. And from chaos of these painful feelings in one cold blizzardly night my crime was born. Yes, I have stolen your story, and know, why I so have a little changed in it? I could not type(collect) more, at me hands shivered. Shivering as in a fever, I have sent the letter in edition, have drunk somnolent and was forgot by a heavy, painful dream.
And in the morning … and in the morning I wished to cancel all, and have written the letter in which asked to not print the story … but was late! The Story has been printed, and to me remains muchitsya shame and fear. And when I have seen your letter, I have tested almost pleasure: at last me have exposed. Strange, but from shoulders as if(as) the mountain has fallen down …
Ah, Katya, Katya, know: plagiarists – the most unfortunate people. They are unhappy not only in creativity, they are unfortunate in all … to Me of 30 years, and I do not have either family, or child, I live one, the man which I love, never will be mine … And before, in a youth, in the childhood so was pleasures in my life a little, to one mountain and eternal tears. I write this letter and to crying. If you would know, what to me now! I Beg you, Katya, write to me though something. It will be heavy to me to live with an idea, that you hate me and never forgive.
Ale Krysyuk
The letter
Katyas Balalajkinoj
Eveline Krysyuk
Date: on January, 21st 2004 23.55
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: the Ale <evelina@bzz.rut>
Theme: Keep
Hello, the Ale. I did not expect, if is fair, such letter … At all I do not know, that to you to tell. Certainly, I have forgiven you. But it is impossible to run into such inferiority complex! Why you think, what are worthless? The Letter has not left at me such impression, you very precisely express the ideas. Your recognition has made huge impression upon me. Can, you simply in any way will not find the way in art?
Thanks for warm words in my address, but, in my opinion, you exaggerate. Not too well I write, my stories as consider(count) the some people, too are secondary … Can, they and are right, I do not know. But you should not surrender, the Ale! Plagiarism is not an output(exit), even if you on edge(territory) of a chasm of despair. Keep. If it will be absolutely bad, write. I shall try to help(assist), than I can.
Your Katya
The answer
Eveliny Krysyuk
To Katya Balalajkinoj
Date: on January, 22nd 2004 8.00
From whom: the Ale <evelina@bzz.rut>
To whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
Theme: Re: Keep
Thanks, Katenka, thanks huge for your wonderful(strange) letter! You an angel if have managed to find for me words of support. I again feel the person, I again live, I again hope. If you knew, how I was struck with your idea, that I, probably, in any way shall not find the way in art. It is literally as light in the end of the tunnel. Really, I for a long time koleblyus: instead of whether to pass to me to verses? In fact in prose I cannot master the form, and in poetry as spoke Akhmatova, an instant of lyrical excitement kratok and the main thing to have time to embody it. How you think, Katenka, it is necessary to me to try(taste) yourself in poetry?
Yours of the Ale
The letter
Katyas Balalajkinoj
Eveline Krysyuk
Date: on January, 22nd 2004 18.12
From whom: Katya Balalajkina <balalajka@mail.rut>
To whom: the Ale evelina@bzz.rut>
Theme: Re:Re: Keep
Hello, the Ale! Certainly, try(taste) itself in poetry. You the person emotional, at you it should turn out. The main thing – to not despond and to not surrender.
Your Katya
_____ the Epilogue _____
It is published on a site
« Waves of poetry »
On November, 11th, 2003
Natalia Gorshenina
Repentance
The nature feels emptiness,
Aspiring it to fill more soon.
Let I shall find freedom:
On what to me without love freedom?
In fact renouncing love–
Criminal, sad, povinnoj,
We renounce, alas,
From the best half.
Also what hateful freedom?
The ships are free in the sea,
But all of them go through waters
Then only, to reach(achieve) love.
On July, 11th, 2000
Female portal
"LADA"
Our poetic competition of " the Instant of love » comes to an end. On February, 14th, in Day enamoured, we shall inform you names of winners. And today, on February, 9th, 2004 , we represent you last participant of our competition, Evelinu Krysyuk, and her poem
Repentance
The nature feels emptiness,
Aspiring it to fill more soon.
Let I shall find freedom:
On what to me without love freedom?
In fact renouncing love–
Criminal, sad, povinnoj,
We renounce, alas,
From the best half.
Also what hateful freedom?
The ships are free in the sea,
But all of them go through waters
Then only, to reach(achieve) love.
On January, 22nd, 2004
ALICIA FRIDMAN (ATHENS,GREECE)
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